Things i come up with at first sight is that your Air defence is pretty weak since
they're pretty mutch on the outer side.
And it i think its pretty hogable - Allot of defences are side by side with no traps
in between.
I like it but I think it is a little too compact. Compact th 9 bases like this one are subject to 3 star go wipes from some opposing th 9 bases and most opposing th 10 bases.