do you want feedback on it?Originally Posted by Squinty
My first ever gift
hope you like it
do you want feedback on it?My first ever gift
hope you like it
Why Not, I'm Guessing this is horrible?
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Danny//lvl 64//th7
It's not 'horrible' as such....here is my feedback!
1. Your render really stands out from the background, try to blend them together a little more!
2. Your text IS 'horrible' doesn't fit in with the tag at all, try making iit smaller and putting it below his reaching arm! Also maybe add some effects to the text like: Stroke, Outer Glow, Gradients etc
3. You have tried to smudge your background....It totally ruins the flow of his reaching arm! Try to make the smudges fit in with the render and whatever action the render is doing!
I know this all sounds harsh but if you listen to everyone's feedback then you will improve greatly!
Well that was niceHaha yea I should probably get to bed.....
That was also my first time ever trying a smudge-like thingy so....yup
Awwwwww tysm!! I agree with Alex on the points below though. Also, may I recommend blurring the very outer edges of the render to make it fit in more?My first ever gift
hope you like it
Outer Glow looks pretty rubbish on most text BTW.
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Danny//lvl 64//th7
Change text. Rest is improving.Gift for CDT
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Thx Matt ;D on it now!!
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Danny//lvl 64//th7
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"When all is down, not all is lost"
Danny//lvl 64//th7
Try moving the text next to the renders shoulder. Thanks for the gift thoughUpdated
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Last edited by Squinty; July 13th, 2014 at 07:41 AM.
"When all is down, not all is lost"
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