After i read this again, it sounded a bit harsh. I didnt mean to be:
To be honest and no offense at all, and to let you know, you done much better work before. I can imagine you making a better sig. Maybe its because its not blended in much? Other sigs had great blending. Also c4ds are supposed to help blend in and help the flow of the sig. This sig the flow is kinda bad. I dont know where to look.
render is in a great spot, using the rule of thirds, but the text isnt. Bring it down more. Background is cool but c4d isnt. Work on your blending, and flow. Everything else is great
