My first self base creation...

[robkisgod]

Any feedback I can get, just trying to see if I am on right track to creating a successful base design

[Ulitimatesplash]

Unless you're done with elixir upgrades, which you're not, keep it inside.

[robkisgod]

this better...

[nathannathan1232]

The gold is all on the right side, and the elixir is on the left. Try mixing up the storages.
There are improper junctions.

I hope this helps.