I'd like to have some feedback on my base that I made

ok i made a base on clash of clans builder. and thanks to detective i now know how to post it here. so i was wondering what you guys think about this base i made?

http://i.imgur.com/s9K8c7Z.png

I called it Hawk because its got wings and stuff. the walls at the bottom above the army camps are the claws, i had 4 walls left over so i decided to go with the hawk theme. the bit sticking out at the top is the head and the bit sticking out at the bottom is the tale. anyways could you guys rate my base out of 10, and give me some feedback if possible.

PS:thanks detective! you're awesome!

and I'm so stupid, i forgot to put the poll in. *facepalm*

ill ask a mod to put it on. it will be up soon, then you can vote

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http://i1313.photobucket.com/albums/...psf731ec60.jpg

The ADs are easily picked off and then air bombarded to pieces. Just the way I like it ;)

Both splashers and air defences are lobsided. I think you might have gone too much on the theme and not balance it out yet too much. Cloistering is ok, just tower placement need work.

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Originally Posted by OJM

http://i1313.photobucket.com/albums/...psf731ec60.jpg

The ADs are easily picked off and then air bombarded to pieces. Just the way I like it ;)

Both splashers and air defences are lobsided. I think you might have gone too much on the theme and not balance it out yet too much. Cloistering is ok, just tower placement need work.

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i should have mentioned I'm not the best at base making

and i figured out the theme after i made it. i tried to balance it as best as i could, but the numbers were to uneven

Read the base design guide on my sig and re-think your base :) It's not that bad that you need to :( I've drawn on paper 20+ bases and on those design tools twice as many, most of them getting the boot after seeing them ready ;)

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Originally Posted by OJM

Read the base design guide on my sig and re-think your base :) It's not that bad that you need to :( I've drawn on paper 20+ bases and on those design tools twice as many, most of them getting the boot after seeing them ready ;)

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thanks ill keep those hints in mind for the next base i make. I'm still using pingfaos till i make a good base

still wanting some more feedback tho

As soon as I saw it, I realised a few errors.

1. ALL the mortars are very exposed and remember to always have them in a triangular formation
2. Two of your wizard towers are protecting your storages but then the third wizard tower is too exposed and also has to be in triangular formation at least protecting one storage.
3. Your base will get hammered by mass dragons as ALL of your air defences are exposed, if I was using mass dragons, I'd attack from the side with 2 air defences so I can take them out quickly and then the dragons will do their job.
4. Overall, the layout is bad, sorry, and I suggest making a new one
5. The good thing is that you're making your own base! :D

Good luck!

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Originally Posted by Detective

As soon as I saw it, I realised a few errors.

1. ALL the mortars are very exposed and remember to always have them in a triangular formation
2. Two of your wizard towers are protecting your storages but then the third wizard tower is too exposed and also has to be in triangular formation at least protecting one storage.
3. Your base will get hammered by mass dragons as ALL of your air defences are exposed, if I was using mass dragons, I'd attack from the side with 2 air defences so I can take them out quickly and then the dragons will do their job.
4. Overall, the layout is bad, sorry, and I suggest making a new one
5. The good thing is that you're making your own base! :D

Good luck!

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holiday to do list:
MAKE NEW BASE!!!