http://i.imgur.com/QxcXmbl.png
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Not going to cnc the 2nd since I'm lazy and I believe that this is the better out of the two^^
First of all, I dislike the glow on the c4ds, it's way too strong and would be better with linear dodge instead of colour burn/dodge. Another thing I would do is add some more shadows, don't use lighting effects, but use the edge of a soft white brush with the fill lowered. A rain texture might be cool as well, to emphasize the atmosphere.
- Panda
The first one was the entry for BSOTW #273
Those motion blurres doesn't help imo.The c4d placement is good,but the overall appearence is meh.
The second one was the entry for TOTW #1 :D
I like the BG and the c4ds used,but they are kinda misplaced.Also,i can't see some adj. layers in it
Eh I'll do the second.
I don't like c4ds, so I'm going to say get rid of those, but that's just me. Anyway, the c4ds don't go with the render for me. And the render's wings is a bit faded in comparison to the rest of the render. But that could also be this terrible computer.
the first one mate just doesn;t work
I like the glowing balls but just the blur or smudge thing on the render makes it look LQ
Bump- any more CNC? :o
No. C4Ds are great. Have a look at Wishlah's work.
http://wishlah.deviantart.com/art/GUMI-511271841
http://wishlah.deviantart.com/art/Mirai-Nikki-510618545
http://wishlah.deviantart.com/art/Ma...uter-497790535
http://wishlah.deviantart.com/art/Pa...llab-491491563
http://wishlah.deviantart.com/art/Ezreal-Tag-490365567
Second one isn't that good, like the first one though! KIU