milos and witch collab

milos start
http://i.imgur.com/ogZ10JT.png
meh finish
http://i.imgur.com/H19hZRM.png
ikr changed about 70% of the things:rolleyes:

It's pretty decent,more touches would help :D
Also,I like that vector brush
BUT...always is a "but" the text is weird and distracts from the focal.Get rid of it

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Originally Posted by Trux

It's pretty decent,more touches would help :D
Also,I like that vector brush
BUT...always is a "but" the text is weird and distracts from the focal.Get rid of it

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lawl apparently bebas nuea (or what ever it's called) doesn't work for collabs.....huh

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Originally Posted by witchspawner

lawl apparently bebas nuea (or what ever it's called) doesn't work for collabs.....huh

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First of all,is Bebas Neue.
Second,the font is good,but you misplaced the text...too big,wrong place.It should be near the focal,not distracting

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Originally Posted by witchspawner

lawl apparently bebas nuea (or what ever it's called) doesn't work for collabs.....huh

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the font should fit your piece. times new roman can work as well eg. in Izaya's and Maiv's collab, they used times new roman.

Just to point out, we tried to make it look as noobish as possible :D

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Originally Posted by Milos22

Just to point out, we tried to make it look as noobish as possible :D

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Sure...:rolleyes:

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Originally Posted by Tmoss1125

Sure...:rolleyes:

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Originally Posted by Milos22

Just to point out, we tried to make it look as noobish as possible :D

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ya we did...
buuuut I didn't follow da plan and went to make it as ok as I could