This is an example of my work. (more to come soon)
http://i.imgur.com/hbiXFRT.png
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This is an example of my work. (more to come soon)
http://i.imgur.com/hbiXFRT.png
I don't see any work...yet
EDIT: Work came as a link. I prefer attachments...as I cannot see the link. My internet blocks it, which doesn't bother me.
Use the bb code provided on imgur to post the actual image (so it doesnt show as a link but rather the image)
cuz attachments are just as annoying :P
like this?
http://i.imgur.com/DiTNS7x.png
Not bad- try experimenting a bit more. Try adding renders and using C4Ds. Maybe if you have some spare time watch some tuts on youtube. :cool:
http://i.imgur.com/LIFaINI.png
Credit to...
Creator of image
Renderer
That line/glow on the render is bad, so is the text. No offense, don't use that canvas size it's way too large. If you actually want to get into this, here you go: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SpAwrA5dThc
so what do you use?
I will post signatures later today.
Look forward to seeing it. :o
Something which I always recommend to beginners when they're just starting out is to pick a colour theme and stick with it.
You have the Pekka which is grey and pink- but the text is green and the back ground black. The background is fine but the green text isn't really. I would of probably gone with a pink/purple colour to fit with the Pekka.
Also the Pekka render has a white outline around it which makes the piece look messing. Sorry mate.
I figured out how to get the white lines out but I still think this is horrible.
http://i.imgur.com/Q7fMHjj.png
What you did good:
- Colour theme- orange and purple. Liking it!
What you need to improve:
- Text- different fonts (go onto dafont.com and download some new ones)
- Depth- try using some c4ds to add a more 3d look to your work
- Use more cleanly cut renders
- Smaller text
Getting better bit by bit- keep it up! :cool:
http://i.imgur.com/hbiXFRT.png
Is this one better it has 1. smaller text 2. render is cleaner tell me what you think @FireTheif
You want the render as your focal point but that does not mean make it as such a close up
heh, boys... Calm down.. :rolleyes:
.... Bro, you should probably stop before this gets any bigger.. You wouldn't wanna risk getting your thread closed, would you? :rolleyes:
He is a gfxer beyond your time. He can rate every work possible.
Not to destory you. Unless you want to not get helped on your work let them CNC your work.
Thank you guys :o (>'_')>
It is to close up. I don't even know much about CNCing other works but I can say that the render is WAY to close. I would improve on how close the render is.
Well thats the defintion of a close up
Screw this. You obviously can't stand having your work criticised
Let me try & tell you what these peepz have been trying to say..
The render is too big because you can't see much of it (Only the eyes, the forehead etc..) You should try n' make it smaller.. Not too small, but smaller.
Right now it is indeed looking like a close up, and honestly, you can see that from miles away..
So would you just please take the CNC you get and do something useful with it? :)
This is me trying to be nice.
Thank you all! Conversation over hopefully. I will take all your CNCs into consideration and will have another example soon! Thanks, Goodnight.
The people are Giving you
Cnc so that you can improve
Its their opinons and basically there your crowd buyers, they are the people you should please
If you did not say and I quote " It's not to close up so shush it" you could have improved a long time ago.
Thank you all! Conversation over hopefully. I will take all your CNCs into consideration and will have another example soon! Thanks, Goodnight.
Does he still look like a squashed bug?
http://i.imgur.com/eVO6aCl.png
is this better?
http://i.imgur.com/BaArqIV.png
1)No depth, add some c4ds, lighting and shadows
2)background is boring.
3)text is too far away from the focal
4)why are you working with 500x100? use 500x300... 500x100 is like the most disgusting size ever.
5) search up colour themes and work on your colour harmony.
6) your balloon has a hole in it.
7) add lighting and shadows.
Your improving though
Getting better- make the text bigger and use more interesting texts.
The render is also way too big- make it smaller. The render is meant to be the made focal but at the same time we're kinda meant to see most of it not just his well shaped nose. :rolleyes:
You need to work on your depth its very 2D atm- try using C4Ds to help you with that.
Otherwise, overall I am seeing improvement mi amigo- keep it up! :cool: