This is an example of my work. (more to come soon)
http://i.imgur.com/hbiXFRT.png
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This is an example of my work. (more to come soon)
http://i.imgur.com/hbiXFRT.png
I don't see any work...yet
EDIT: Work came as a link. I prefer attachments...as I cannot see the link. My internet blocks it, which doesn't bother me.
Would an attachment be easier...because these links I can't visit.Quote:
Originally Posted by xxx3xxx
It is very much so better. I can see it nice blends well.Quote:
Originally Posted by xxx3xxx
Use the bb code provided on imgur to post the actual image (so it doesnt show as a link but rather the image)
cuz attachments are just as annoying :P
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Originally Posted by Ayyyyyema
like this?
http://i.imgur.com/DiTNS7x.png
Not bad- try experimenting a bit more. Try adding renders and using C4Ds. Maybe if you have some spare time watch some tuts on youtube. :cool:
Please dont ever use the magic eraser. either render with the pen tool or use renders.Quote:
Originally Posted by xxx3xxx
and theres so much empty space. try a different font and colour...
try to add depth with c4ds or lighting and shading.
thats all i can say atm...
Render is very pixelated and the text is nearly impossible to read. Moody and then I have no clue- J something by the looks of it.Quote:
Originally Posted by xxx3xxx
http://i.imgur.com/LIFaINI.png
Credit to...
Creator of image
Renderer
what have you actually done? xDDDDQuote:
Originally Posted by xxx3xxx
yes, i see.Quote:
Originally Posted by FireThief
it says moodyji
i'll make another one where the text will be more clear
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Originally Posted by theblackbeltpanda64
i did the other ones, i dont really know why i put that one
That line/glow on the render is bad, so is the text. No offense, don't use that canvas size it's way too large. If you actually want to get into this, here you go: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SpAwrA5dThcQuote:
Originally Posted by xxx3xxx
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Originally Posted by rawtalent
thanks for the video but i dont use Photoshop
so what do you use?
I will post signatures later today.
Look forward to seeing it. :oQuote:
Originally Posted by xxx3xxx
Something which I always recommend to beginners when they're just starting out is to pick a colour theme and stick with it.Quote:
Originally Posted by xxx3xxx
You have the Pekka which is grey and pink- but the text is green and the back ground black. The background is fine but the green text isn't really. I would of probably gone with a pink/purple colour to fit with the Pekka.
Also the Pekka render has a white outline around it which makes the piece look messing. Sorry mate.
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Originally Posted by Twinklers101
Oh, I use Gimp but that was try outs, now i figured out how to make signatures.
I think i'll just do signatures.
You don't need to be sorry, By telling me what is wrong with the picture you are telling me how to fix ir=t and next time make it better.Quote:
Originally Posted by FireThief
Alright, well don't lose heart. Keep with it. Believe me- you should of seen my work when I first started aha, it was beyond terrible. :rolleyes:Quote:
Originally Posted by xxx3xxx
lol, thanks fireQuote:
Originally Posted by FireThief
http://i.imgur.com/iZprp47.jpgQuote:
Originally Posted by FireThief
I'm gonna flippin.... kick you to pluto bro. Can't believe you have this saved to your pc. I mean seriously?! :rolleyes:Quote:
Originally Posted by theblackbeltpanda64
was that your first one?:confused::confused::confused::confused:Quote:
Originally Posted by FireThief
I figured out how to get the white lines out but I still think this is horrible.
http://i.imgur.com/Q7fMHjj.png
Yep- my first ever sig.Quote:
Originally Posted by xxx3xxx
1)very emptyQuote:
Originally Posted by xxx3xxx
2)no depth. try adding c4ds or lighting and shading
3)stick to one focal for now.
4)use the rule of thirds to determine the placement of your render
5) use stocks instead of a solid colour fill.
That is amazing for your first one.Quote:
Originally Posted by FireThief
Mine are HORRIBLE
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Originally Posted by theblackbeltpanda64
1) I told you it was horrible
2) This is in GIMP right?
3) My goal was to get rid of the white lines
4) what is that?
They seriously aren't that bad. :oQuote:
Originally Posted by xxx3xxx
even if it is horrible, you still need cnc to improve.Quote:
Originally Posted by xxx3xxx
2)it doesnt matter. i have photoshop cc
3)i didnt know that
4)backgrounds.
Really? I think they are so plain.Quote:
Originally Posted by FireThief
Thanks!
oh okay thanks i'll start doing backgrounds but not now, i will be on later and hopefully i will have something new.Quote:
Originally Posted by theblackbeltpanda64
What you did good:Quote:
Originally Posted by xxx3xxx
- Colour theme- orange and purple. Liking it!
What you need to improve:
- Text- different fonts (go onto dafont.com and download some new ones)
- Depth- try using some c4ds to add a more 3d look to your work
- Use more cleanly cut renders
- Smaller text
Getting better bit by bit- keep it up! :cool:
Thanks, i will add this.Quote:
Originally Posted by FireThief
No problem man. Happy Christmas! :cool:Quote:
Originally Posted by xxx3xxx
http://i.imgur.com/hbiXFRT.png
Is this one better it has 1. smaller text 2. render is cleaner tell me what you think @FireTheif
You want the render as your focal point but that does not mean make it as such a close up
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Originally Posted by Twinklers101
It's not a close up.
The whole render would not fit on the background!
Looks pretty close to meQuote:
Originally Posted by xxx3xxx
Well it might be close but its not a close up so shush it.Quote:
Originally Posted by Twinklers101
You clearly do not know what you are talking about, so shush it.Quote:
Originally Posted by xxx3xxx
heh, boys... Calm down.. :rolleyes:
how did you get in the conversation?Quote:
Originally Posted by theblackbeltpanda64
You can't tell me that I don't know what i'm talking about because you did not make it, I did!
So you shush it!
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Originally Posted by Miimo
lolz tell them to stop telling me that I do not know what my own work is.
You have absolutely zero right to say that to him.Quote:
Originally Posted by xxx3xxx
His work is beyond amazing, despite for his age.
You have started recently, so he does have the right to say that.
.... Bro, you should probably stop before this gets any bigger.. You wouldn't wanna risk getting your thread closed, would you? :rolleyes:
He is a gfxer beyond your time. He can rate every work possible.
This does not make any sense. I have a better GFX brain than you, and I don't even do GFX! (yet :rolleyes:)Quote:
Originally Posted by xxx3xxx
They are giving you CNC to help you. So let them.
Not to destory you. Unless you want to not get helped on your work let them CNC your work.
Thank you guys :o (>'_')>
They are not helping me by telling me my work is close up.Quote:
Originally Posted by Shadowkungfu
The only reason I posted that was for Fire thief to reply.
It is not a close up.
It is way to close. I think he would say that the render was way to close up.Quote:
Originally Posted by xxx3xxx
what is your definition of cnc? Sugar coated words?Quote:
Originally Posted by xxx3xxx
There that is a nice way to say it.Quote:
Originally Posted by bob124
No need to accuse me for making a close up because it is not.
It is to close up. I don't even know much about CNCing other works but I can say that the render is WAY to close. I would improve on how close the render is.
No if you're not gonna post something useful here don't post at all.Quote:
Originally Posted by theblackbeltpanda64
Well thats the defintion of a close up
I did not intentionally do it like you were saying.Quote:
Originally Posted by Twinklers101
He is trying to help you and you are going crazy about the CNC he gave. Like it can help you learn something.Quote:
Originally Posted by xxx3xxx
Screw this. You obviously can't stand having your work criticised
Let me try & tell you what these peepz have been trying to say..Quote:
Originally Posted by xxx3xxx
The render is too big because you can't see much of it (Only the eyes, the forehead etc..) You should try n' make it smaller.. Not too small, but smaller.
Right now it is indeed looking like a close up, and honestly, you can see that from miles away..
So would you just please take the CNC you get and do something useful with it? :)
This is me trying to be nice.
I agree. Just listen to people's CNC and you will improve if you follow it.Quote:
Originally Posted by theblackbeltpanda64
Your a village maiden and I also agree with him.Quote:
Originally Posted by Miimo
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Originally Posted by theblackbeltpanda64
Of course I don't wont criticism if you're gonna be rude about it.
We are not trying to be rude. You just are not taking the CNC right and you are againnst what it really is. It is far to close up. Make it smaller and you will have improved like magic.Quote:
Originally Posted by xxx3xxx
Thank you all! Conversation over hopefully. I will take all your CNCs into consideration and will have another example soon! Thanks, Goodnight.
Thats so hypocritical of you. Twinklers didnt say anything wrong to you, you're the one who said "the render isnt close up, so shush it" i wouldn have said anything wrong to you if you weren't so rude to twinklersQuote:
Originally Posted by xxx3xxx
The people are Giving you
Cnc so that you can improve
Its their opinons and basically there your crowd buyers, they are the people you should please
If you did not say and I quote " It's not to close up so shush it" you could have improved a long time ago.
Thank you all! Conversation over hopefully. I will take all your CNCs into consideration and will have another example soon! Thanks, Goodnight.
My hero!!!!!!Quote:
Originally Posted by theblackbeltpanda64
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Originally Posted by Twinklers101
You stilll don't listen! I have said that it is over twice!
you have a new hero!!!! Now you can follow him everywhere!!!Quote:
Originally Posted by twinklers101
if you join me we may be able to find where he lives!!!!Quote:
Originally Posted by bob124
OK WE WILL STOP UNTILL NEXT POST BY YOU
He only said "My hero!!!!!!!!"Quote:
Originally Posted by xxx3xxx
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Originally Posted by bob124
I know but i said that i would take all CNCs into consideration and that this conversation was over.
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Originally Posted by xxx3xxx
YEAH WOO
But now the render is a bit out there and a little squashed looking
Look at my sig see the render does not look squashed, add some c4ds and lighting to create depth and perspective
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Originally Posted by Twinklers101
OKAY
p.s. I squashed him like a bug
Thats better but text is 2 small.Quote:
Originally Posted by xxx3xxx
Does he still look like a squashed bug?
http://i.imgur.com/eVO6aCl.png
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Originally Posted by bob124
At first my text was too big now it's to small, make up your mind people! lolz
Background is plain. Use some c4ds and make sure the skeleton is not infested in red.Quote:
Originally Posted by xxx3xxx
is this better?Quote:
Originally Posted by bob124
http://i.imgur.com/BaArqIV.png
1)No depth, add some c4ds, lighting and shadowsQuote:
Originally Posted by xxx3xxx
2)background is boring.
3)text is too far away from the focal
4)why are you working with 500x100? use 500x300... 500x100 is like the most disgusting size ever.
5) search up colour themes and work on your colour harmony.
6) your balloon has a hole in it.
7) add lighting and shadows.
Actually,2 holes.Quote:
Originally Posted by theblackbeltpanda64
But yeah...your gfx examples are like mine when I was like you xD
With the time,you'll improve,but try to follow panda ATM,he knows what he says
Your improving though
Getting better- make the text bigger and use more interesting texts.Quote:
Originally Posted by xxx3xxx
The render is also way too big- make it smaller. The render is meant to be the made focal but at the same time we're kinda meant to see most of it not just his well shaped nose. :rolleyes:
You need to work on your depth its very 2D atm- try using C4Ds to help you with that.
Otherwise, overall I am seeing improvement mi amigo- keep it up! :cool:
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Originally Posted by theblackbeltpanda64
i will find lighting and shadows