I'm new at GFX here is an example of my work

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Originally Posted by xxx3xxx

I figured out how to get the white lines out but I still think this is horrible.

http://i.imgur.com/Q7fMHjj.png

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1)very empty
2)no depth. try adding c4ds or lighting and shading
3)stick to one focal for now.
4)use the rule of thirds to determine the placement of your render
5) use stocks instead of a solid colour fill.

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Originally Posted by FireThief

Yep- my first ever sig.

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That is amazing for your first one.
Mine are HORRIBLE

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Originally Posted by theblackbeltpanda64

1)very empty
2)no depth. try adding c4ds or lighting and shading
3)stick to one focal for now.
4)use the rule of thirds to determine the placement of your render
5) use stocks instead of a solid colour fill.

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1) I told you it was horrible
2) This is in GIMP right?
3) My goal was to get rid of the white lines
4) what is that?

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Originally Posted by xxx3xxx

That is amazing for your first one.
Mine are HORRIBLE

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They seriously aren't that bad. :o

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Originally Posted by xxx3xxx

1) I told you it was horrible
2) This is in GIMP right?
3) My goal was to get rid of the white lines
4) what is that?

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even if it is horrible, you still need cnc to improve.
2)it doesnt matter. i have photoshop cc
3)i didnt know that
4)backgrounds.

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Originally Posted by FireThief

They seriously aren't that bad. :o

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Really? I think they are so plain.
Thanks!

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Originally Posted by theblackbeltpanda64

even if it is horrible, you still need cnc to improve.
2)it doesnt matter. i have photoshop cc
3)i didnt know that
4)backgrounds.

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oh okay thanks i'll start doing backgrounds but not now, i will be on later and hopefully i will have something new.

http://i.imgur.com/fap33vj.png

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Originally Posted by xxx3xxx

http://i.imgur.com/fap33vj.png

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What you did good:

• Colour theme- orange and purple. Liking it!

What you need to improve:

• Text- different fonts (go onto dafont.com and download some new ones)
• Depth- try using some c4ds to add a more 3d look to your work
• Use more cleanly cut renders
• Smaller text

Getting better bit by bit- keep it up! :cool:

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Originally Posted by FireThief

What you did good:

• Colour theme- orange and purple. Liking it!

What you need to improve:

• Text- different fonts (go onto dafont.com and download some new ones)
• Depth- try using some c4ds to add a more 3d look to your work
• Use more cleanly cut renders
• Smaller text

Getting better bit by bit- keep it up! :cool:

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Thanks, i will add this.