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can you just have a cnc thread and put all tags in one thread pls? ty.
Besides the point,
Back on topic -
Some Cnc would be great thanks ^.^
BTW, if you say something on this thread that isn't CnC, JZ, I'm going to create a new thread sending the exact same message, and if you do the same thing, I'll have to call a mod. A CnC thread is a CnC thread. If you need to ask something, then either PM or VM the person.
My favorite tag atm from you so far... Maybe remove the orange/whitey thing at the right? Sort of draws my eyes towards that direction instead of render>text. But yeah, great job :p
This could benefit from some more abstract shapes with bolder effects. You used parts of different objects to fill up the composition that really don't make much sense other than filling up space. The complete black you are using for negative space doesn't really help at all, even by brushing that area with some soft gray spots, you'll be able to achieve some depth. In addition, referring back to bolder effects, the elements are all relatively static and could greatly benefit from some sort of energy, successful manipulation of effect c4ds usually do the trick. The elements don't help one another but instead just sit there and don't guide the eye to the focal. When this happens, you have failed to construct a good composition.
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in an aesthetic standpoint, this isn't bad at all. Although a bit novice because of the lack of flare (something that makes this stand out), the quality is on point, which is something you need to keep doing well. Tags with good concepts and ideas and composition and potential still fall short when executed poorly, especially when done in low quality. It simply does not do the tags justice.
Left hand seems bare as its so dark. Its over sharpened, I can see pixelation in some parts. KIU