Sniperman Signature - Think I stuffed up the focal, CnC so I can get ur point of view

http://s14.postimg.org/4t71vay81/Sniper_Signature.jpg

So, as title says, I think I f****d the focal since I rarely ever work with such small renders, but I'd like your point of view as to how it can be improved to make the render stand out more. Thanks.

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Originally Posted by Recricon

http://s14.postimg.org/4t71vay81/Sniper_Signature.jpg

So, as title says, I think I f****d the focal since I rarely ever work with such small renders, but I'd like your point of view as to how it can be improved to make the render stand out more. Thanks.

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imo stock is the focal lol

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Originally Posted by JZDaBoss123

imo stock is the focal lol

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Yeah, I already got that mate... This isn't "CnC". This is stating the obvious.
I said and I quote

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Originally Posted by Recricon

So, as title says, I think I f****d the focal since I rarely ever work with such small renders, but I'd like your point of view as to how it can be improved to make the render stand out more. Thanks.

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Hmm, looks good but not a fan of the font of the sub-text. Doesn't suit IMO, but I guess that's just me :p

Dodge took the render and darken the stock. Add light source to render and maybe get a 1% opacity brush of white over it.

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Originally Posted by JZDaBoss123

Dodge took the render and darken the stock. Add light source to render and maybe get a 1% opacity brush of white over it.

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LOL oh no....

dont darken anything else. Its far too dark towards the renders back and its making it drown into the background.
Over saturated a bit again. I think you could have moved the render to the right a tad more since hes fairly thin in width.
I also think the text being wider then the render makes it take the focal away.

Also, the sub text is not a very good fit. It like pops out of the image.