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Nice, but you should shift the render a bit to the right, centered sigs don't look as good as one's placed to the sides. And also, the text doesn't match the image, more specifically the gradient used...
I like it a lot, like NZXT said, remove the text, I like V1 more and I like what you did with the apple being colored. My only suggestion is add some sort of a light source and maybe a slight sepia filter.. You don't want to make it seem too dull.
I prefer v1. The colored fractals don't match the theme of the tag. Also, take out the text, it is completely irrelevant.
Thats not true. At all.
theres plenty of centered art that works you just have to have the right thing going on in the background. Like whats kinda goin on here with the blur. To move it over wouldnt look right. And sooooo many smudges look better centered. Lol dont know where ur gettin ur info :p
I like this but agree that the color around could be implemented in a better way. About the text, it's not the color that's wrong although it would be better if it matched the apple's color. That shadow on it should be removed and maybe add a small stroke to it. Try a different font.
How so? Tutorials really arent needed to make art. I praise rec for sticking with his own style and not following steps on how to make someone elses style work. Asking for CnC is asking for help IN YOUR OWN OPINION of how it may look better to you. Another pair of eyes on something you've been working on really helps you notice stuff you may have missed or something cool that can be added. That doesnt mean hell actually do it its just suggestions on stuff to try to improve on it.
Kudos!
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