Actually, when you rewrite it, write the first part up as roughly what a player would see on the screen, and then either make your detailed explanations later down the post, or put in after each section, with some intuitive formating.
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For example:
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You have a your main idea, with picture
Then you have your detailed text under it in a less attention getting format. People that want to skim through it can; and won't have thier eyes pulled by stuff that would be too long for thier liking. aka not be TL:DR
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You have your base content as attention grabbing, easy to ready sections, with your details under it. In either case, this allows for people to skim the idea over, and if interested, can read the details with a quick second pass.Quote:
You have your main idea, with a picture
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Both examples make topic finding sections of your idea much easier. You may want to tone down the color usage, large font, and bold typeset that you had in this first version. It is too attention grabbing and distracting. You may want to reserve such things for really important terms or phrases you want to make sure people know. At least don't make the list intro and list itself the same size and color. Making the intro phrase attention grabbing, and not the whole list, is all that you needed in almost every case.
And if you have questions on if it looks alright, stop... take a break, have some lunch, raid a few bases, or something, and step back to it with the mindset of seeing it for the first time, since that's what will be the case for people seeing your new post.
Anyway, I hope this helps. I have a few ideas I wanted to add before your second write-up, since you have had so much luck in presentation and getting people's attention, but that'd be for another post. Don't want to mix topics in the same post. And good luck.

