New Troop - Lakra

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July 31st, 2014
Miimo

New Troop - Lakra

Hey. So I've been thinking about this new troop, and I call her Lakra, ('Lakra' = Tiger in oraon, a tribal language, India).
She Is a human who can turn into a tiger.

During the first half of the raid, She's in her Tiger-form and attacks her MAIN targets, Air defenses and clan castle + troops. In Tiger-form she can jump over walls.
When She's done with her main targets, she turns back into her actual self, which is a human, with an Iron staff.
In her human-form, she deals damage to anything.

Background story:
As a child, Lakra's parents left her to die In the jungle because they thought of her as unwanted.
She was taken in by a family of Tigers, and raised as their own. She grew and somehow absorbed the magic of the wilds, and evolved beyond her human physiology.
Once, when she was out hunting with her Tiger-Sibling, the sibling's foot got stuck under an air defense, and suddenly there were troops coming out of the clan castle. Larka tried to get his foot free but she couldn't. He gave a 'roar' as a sign for her to leave him and hide, and so she did.
She witnessed how the troops slayed her brother, cold-blooded.
Ever since then she has hated civilized people and their constructions. And because of the Air defense that was one of the causes for her brother's death, that Is the construction she hates the most. She also hates the clan castles and the troops inside, and will get her vengeance on them all.

Name of troop: Lakra

(LVL 1, As human, she looks like the picture. As Tiger, she has the colours as the cloak.)
Training Cost: 150 Dark Elixir
Training Time: 10 minutes
Housing Space: 10
Damage Per Second: 65 dmg/s As Human, 75 dmg/s As Tiger.
Hit Points: 305
Movement Speed: 16 As Human, 18 As Tiger.

(LVL 2, same outfits.)
Training cost: 175 Dark Elixir
Training Time: 10 minutes
Housing space: 10
Damage Per Second: 85 dmg/s As Human, 95 dmg/s As Tiger.
Hit Points: 340
Movement Speed: 16 As Human, 18 As Tiger.

(LVL 3, New outfit: New staff, White n' black cloak + tail, White n' black Tiger)
Training Cost: 200 Dark Elixir
Training Time: 10 Minutes
Housing Space: 10
Damage Per Second: 110 dmg/s As Human, 120 dmg/s As Tiger.
Hit Points: 400
Movement Speed: 16 As Human, 18 As Tiger.

Weakness: She can be hit by turrets and traps do 2x damage to her.

Description: ? (Don't know what to write :P).

Any suggestions & feedback are highly welcome :D

Lakra (LVL 1-2):
Attachment 55649
Lakra (LVL 3):
Attachment 55895
July 31st, 2014
Miimo

So, What do you guys think? :P
July 31st, 2014
Miimo

Please answer.. Need all feedback I can get!
July 31st, 2014
Miimo

What do you guys think of my troop, Lakra?
July 31st, 2014
FireThief

Need more info regarding when and how she turns into a tiger tbh. Otherwise its an interesting idea however the concept art could do with a little bit of tweaking.

Like what does she look like as a tiger? And how long does she remain a tiger for?
July 31st, 2014
devin68fitch

Good but a little confusing.

I really like the idea of something that "morphs" and also attacks air deffence. Im also a little fuzzy on the details about when she turns into the tiger. Also, in tiger form, dose she gain any special abilities like wall jumping? I also really like the name and i encourge you to contenue with this great idea and tweak its stats. Thanks for the comment on my phantom.
July 31st, 2014
Miimo

Quote:

Originally Posted by devin68fitch

I really like the idea of something that "morphs" and also attacks air deffence. Im also a little fuzzy on the details about when she turns into the tiger. Also, in tiger form, dose she gain any special abilities like wall jumping? I also really like the name and i encourge you to contenue with this great idea and tweak its stats. Thanks for the comment on my phantom.

When she's In tiger-form she delas more dmg/s, But maybe I should also make her be able to jump over walls?
She turns into a tiger whenever she can't find airdefenses, clancastles + clan castle-troops in her area.
I was thinking she stays as a tiger thruout the whole raid, but what do you think? :P
July 31st, 2014
Miimo

Quote:

Originally Posted by FireThief

Need more info regarding when and how she turns into a tiger tbh. Otherwise its an interesting idea however the concept art could do with a little bit of tweaking.

Like what does she look like as a tiger? And how long does she remain a tiger for?

Ya, It's just an art, and I'm not pro at these stuff..
I already answered those questions to Devin68Fitch.
Read and lemme know what you think, okay :)
August 1st, 2014
JackKelly

interesting

good idea but it should have a weakness (maybe traps do 3 times damage?0
August 1st, 2014
Miimo

Quote:

Originally Posted by JackKelly

good idea but it should have a weakness (maybe traps do 3 times damage?0

Sounds cool, but maybe It's too much? I mean the turrets can still attack her. Maybe 2x.
August 1st, 2014
devin68fitch

Just a though.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Miimo

When she's In tiger-form she delas more dmg/s, But maybe I should also make her be able to jump over walls?
She turns into a tiger whenever she can't find airdefenses, clancastles + clan castle-troops in her area.
I was thinking she stays as a tiger thruout the whole raid, but what do you think? :P

Tigers can jump and leap better than a hog so i see no problem with her being able to jump walls in tiger form. Also, in her "human form" her attack could be ranged, like she throws spears.

My idea is she is a tiger for the first half of the raid, so she can get over the walls to reach the air def (because most bases have the air deffences spread out or buried deep with in the base) then, she targets cc troops/ heros, then after all of her prim targets are eliminated she retuns to a "human"

Their really isnt a reason for her targeting air deffences or cc troops in your description. I would like it to make a little more since than "i want a troop to target air deffences" even though in reality thats the purpous of the troop id like their to be a reasoning behind her vendetta against cc troops and air deffences. :) hope you like the "constructive criticism".
August 1st, 2014
Miimo

Quote:

Originally Posted by devin68fitch

Tigers can jump and leap better than a hog so i see no problem with her being able to jump walls in tiger form.

Okay cool, I will keep the wall-jumping.
Thanks for the Idea man, you're awesome :D
August 1st, 2014
devin68fitch

I sent that too early and added on to my reply a little more.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Miimo

Okay cool, I will keep the wall-jumping.
Thanks for the Idea man, you're awesome :D

I appologize for sending that message too early.
August 1st, 2014
Miimo

Quote:

Originally Posted by devin68fitch

Tigers can jump and leap better than a hog so i see no problem with her being able to jump walls in tiger form. Also, in her "human form" her attack could be ranged, like she throws spears.

My idea is she is a tiger for the first half of the raid, so she can get over the walls to reach the air def (because most bases have the air deffences spread out or buried deep with in the base) then, she targets cc troops/ heros, then after all of her prim targets are eliminated she retuns to a "human"

Their really isnt a reason for her targeting air deffences or cc troops in your description. I would like it to make a little more since than "i want a troop to target air deffences" even though in reality thats the purpous of the troop id like their to be a reasoning behind her vendetta against cc troops and air deffences. :) hope you like the "constructive criticism".

Yeah, that also sounds like a great idea.
I'll change it to that. It does make more sence xD
But I think I wanna keep her Iron staff ^^
August 1st, 2014
devin68fitch

Stats need improv.

She needs a lot of health. Around 350 hp. Remember, she will be running around the base attacking air defenses and taking on cc troops later. The damage is fine. The training time is a little long but i guess its fine. Also, i believe super cell wants dark troops and not regular elixir troops (considering there are still 5 slots available for new troops in the dark barracks and 0 in the regular barracks). She is your creation and i hope you dont think im forcing anything on to you. Im just trying to help out your troop be considered by Supercell.
August 1st, 2014
Miimo

Quote:

Originally Posted by devin68fitch

She needs a lot of health. Around 350 hp. Remember, she will be running around the base attacking air defenses and taking on cc troops later. The damage is fine. The training time is a little long but i guess its fine. Also, i believe super cell wants dark troops and not regular elixir troops (considering there are still 5 slots available for new troops in the dark barracks and 0 in the regular barracks). She is your creation and i hope you dont think im forcing anything on to you. Im just trying to help out your troop be considered by Supercell.

AHHH, i didn't know that they were only looking for dark troops :c
Could you like, help me with the cost then, because I don't have dark barracks to look at and get inspiration xD
August 1st, 2014
Miimo

Could you please read the starter-thread, I've changed alot, and wanna see If you think it's a good Idea or not.
Thank you.
August 1st, 2014
Miimo

Quote:

Originally Posted by FireThief

Need more info regarding when and how she turns into a tiger tbh. Otherwise its an interesting idea however the concept art could do with a little bit of tweaking.

Like what does she look like as a tiger? And how long does she remain a tiger for?

Check the new info.
Hope it answers your question.
And about that picture of her as a tiger, I'm not really a good artist so that's gonna be tough to make, IF i even do make it :P
August 1st, 2014
Penguininja

Quote:

Originally Posted by Miimo

Hey. So I've been thinking about this new troop, and I call her Lakra, ('Lakra' = Tiger in oraon, a tribal language, India).
She Is a human who can turn into a tiger.

During the first half of the raid, She's in her Tiger-form and attacks her MAIN targets, Air defenses and clan castle + troops. In Tiger-form she can jump over walls.
When She's done with her main targets, she turns back into her actual self, which is a human, with an Iron staff.
In her human-form, she deals damage to anything.

Background story:
As a child, Lakra's parents left her to die In the jungle because they thought of her as unwanted.
She was taken in by a family of Tigers, and raised as their own. She grew and somehow absorbed the magic of the wilds, and evolved beyond her human physiology.
As she grew, So did her hate for civilized people and their constructions. She especially hate the Airdefenses, Clan Castles and the troops inside of them.

She Ain't no Pusseycat.

Name of troop: Lakra

(LVL 1, As human, she looks like the picture. As Tiger, she has the colours as the cloak.)
Training Cost: 45 Dark Elixir
Training Time: 10 minutes
Housing Space: 10
Damage Per Second: 65 dmg/s As Human, 75 dmg/s As Tiger.
Hit Points: 280
Movement Speed: 16 As Human, 18 As Tiger.

(LVL 2, same outfits.)
Training cost: 55 Dark Elixir
Training Time: 10 minutes
Housing space: 10
Damage Per Second: 85 dmg/s As Human, 95 dmg/s As Tiger.
Hit Points: 315
Movement Speed: 16 As Human, 18 As Tiger.

Weakness: She can be hit by turrets and traps do 2x damage to her.

Description: ? (Don't know what to write :P).

Any suggestions & feedback are highly welcome :D

Lakra:
Attachment 55649

I am sorry but i do not see how the Lakra would hate air defenses. There is nothing in the background story about it. Is there any story about a bird that helps and is friends with the Lakra? :P If so that would be a reason.
August 1st, 2014
Miimo

Quote:

Originally Posted by Penguininja

I am sorry but i do not see how the Lakra would hate air defenses. There is nothing in the background story about it. Is there any story about a bird that helps and is friends with the Lakra? :P If so that would be a reason.

So, all you want Is a reason for her to hate the airdefenses?
I'll get to that, but what do you think of HER.
What can i improve ?
August 1st, 2014
Penguininja

Quote:

Originally Posted by Miimo

So, all you want Is a reason for her to hate the airdefenses?
I'll get to that, but what do you think of HER.
What can i improve ?

It is a great idea.
August 1st, 2014
Miimo

Quote:

Originally Posted by Penguininja

It is a great idea.

You can read it now, Penguinninja, I changed the story. Hope you'll like it.
August 1st, 2014
Phyxios

_{Not really a fan of this, nice to see some thought in it, but its a little to over the top, keep it to one form.

also we are currently lacking in an AIR TANKING troop for DE, so I really think thats what supercell should be working on.}
August 1st, 2014
Miimo

Quote:

Originally Posted by Phyxios

_{Not really a fan of this, nice to see some thought in it, but its a little to over the top, keep it to one form.

also we are currently lacking in an AIR TANKING troop for DE, so I really think thats what supercell should be working on.}

I appreciate your honesty.
I actually like the two-form part, so I'm gonna keep that.
Thanks again for taking your time to look :D
August 1st, 2014
Phyxios

Quote:

Originally Posted by Miimo

I appreciate your honesty.
I actually like the two-form part, so I'm gonna keep that.
Thanks again for taking your time to look :D

nothing wrong with that, I just cant ever see Supercell putting it into their game. :)
August 1st, 2014
Miimo

Quote:

Originally Posted by Phyxios

nothing wrong with that, I just cant ever see Supercell putting it into their game. :)

Ya, We all have our own ideas and opinions :)
August 1st, 2014
Miimo

Need more suggestions and feedback!
Come on :D
August 2nd, 2014
Marianna

Nice Idea

I think it is pretty cool and sounds quite creative ;)
August 2nd, 2014
devin68fitch

Improvements and an idea.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Miimo

So, all you want Is a reason for her to hate the airdefenses?
I'll get to that, but what do you think of HER.
What can i improve ?

For the dark baracks, the highest costing troop it the golem at (i believe) 350. The which (unlocke after golem) is 250 (i believe). For your troop i suggest around 200 dark elixir as a starting price. Also, maybe her sensitive tiger ears hate the sound the air deffence makes as it fires missiles. Also, she hates cc troops because a group of clan castle troops killed her mom when she was a cub? I think staying as a tiger is the best option for this troop.
August 2nd, 2014
Miimo

Quote:

Originally Posted by devin68fitch

For the dark baracks, the highest costing troop it the golem at (i believe) 350. The which (unlocke after golem) is 250 (i believe). For your troop i suggest around 200 dark elixir as a starting price. Also, maybe her sensitive tiger ears hate the sound the air deffence makes as it fires missiles. Also, she hates cc troops because a group of clan castle troops killed her mom when she was a cub? I think staying as a tiger is the best option for this troop.

Like the whole time? ..
August 2nd, 2014
devin68fitch

Yes

Quote:

Originally Posted by Miimo

Like the whole time? ..

I think the morphing quality is cool and all but i cant see the morphing thing being too usefull.
August 2nd, 2014
Miimo

Quote:

Originally Posted by devin68fitch

I think the morphing quality is cool and all but i cant see the morphing thing being too usefull.

But Lakra would be like a Hog rider.. All she would do is jump over walls and take down defenses...
Then I guess I'll just give up. Not a useful idea..
August 9th, 2014
Penguininja

Quote:

Originally Posted by Miimo

But Lakra would be like a Hog rider.. All she would do is jump over walls and take down defenses...
Then I guess I'll just give up. Not a useful idea..

Don't give up i like the idea!
September 5th, 2014
Miimo

Meeoooooww--
September 5th, 2014
FireThief

Quote:

Originally Posted by Miimo

Ya, It's just an art, and I'm not pro at these stuff..
I already answered those questions to Devin68Fitch.
Read and lemme know what you think, okay :)

Thanks for the reply- good answers. Personally I don't think this would fit in with CoC but I love the idea. Maybe Super Cell should develop a new game solely for this troop... :rolleyes:
September 6th, 2014
Miimo

Quote:

Originally Posted by FireThief

Thanks for the reply- good answers. Personally I don't think this would fit in with CoC but I love the idea. Maybe Super Cell should develop a new game solely for this troop... :rolleyes:

Ya, maybe it's overrated :P
That would be cool ^_^
September 6th, 2014
TurkeyBacon1999

Stop bumping your thread

Its against forum rules and it isnt cool to bump 15 times in a row