Feedback on new works (new to photoshop!)

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June 26th, 2014
ClashWithStyle

Feedback on new works (new to photoshop!)

If you guys could just give me some feedback that would be great :)

http://i57.tinypic.com/rancpk.jpg

http://i57.tinypic.com/70l1jm.jpg

http://i60.tinypic.com/fbzzbq.jpg

Edited version:
http://i60.tinypic.com/96du6v.jpg

http://i61.tinypic.com/2jeu0kn.jpg

http://i57.tinypic.com/i1d64j.jpg

http://i59.tinypic.com/6thh4z.jpg

edited:
http://i57.tinypic.com/2mfgkg4.jpg

http://i57.tinypic.com/2e4ffk3.jpg

http://i60.tinypic.com/2irm1sp.jpg
June 26th, 2014
nzxt

Very plain, need more composition and depth.
http://i59.tinypic.com/2evvi1c.jpg

Very nice, the font doesn't suit the theme though
http://i62.tinypic.com/kc1pir.jpg

It is best to use C4Ds around the render
http://i62.tinypic.com/ziukjs.jpg
June 26th, 2014
Arz

Quote:

Originally Posted by nzxt

Very plain, need more composition and depth.
http://i59.tinypic.com/2evvi1c.jpg

Very nice, the font doesn't suit the theme though
http://i62.tinypic.com/kc1pir.jpg

It is best to use C4Ds around the render
http://i62.tinypic.com/ziukjs.jpg

agreeneeds more bling in the messi one
June 26th, 2014
ClashWithStyle

Quote:

Originally Posted by nzxt

Very plain, need more composition and depth.
http://i59.tinypic.com/2evvi1c.jpg

Very nice, the font doesn't suit the theme though
http://i62.tinypic.com/kc1pir.jpg

It is best to use C4Ds around the render
http://i62.tinypic.com/ziukjs.jpg

oh ok thanks for the tips!
June 26th, 2014
ClashWithStyle

updated with new work:
http://i57.tinypic.com/rancpk.jpg
June 26th, 2014
nzxt

Quote:

Originally Posted by ClanDragonTooth

updated with new work:
http://i57.tinypic.com/rancpk.jpg

far better, not to fond on the green stock around the text.
your forgot a border :p
June 26th, 2014
ClashWithStyle

Quote:

Originally Posted by nzxt

far better, not to fond on the green stock around the text.
your forgot a border :p

haha thanks, did you watch the stream? and aww so i did, what colour should i make it? Maybe a 1 px black border?
June 26th, 2014
RucionaCoc

Hey would you do youtube GFX?

Starting a clash youtube channel and need a logo and channel art. I really like your work so I was wondering if you could do that.
June 26th, 2014
NeuralFusion

You take constructive criticism well. I mean that as a compliment.

Good work on improving, keep up the good work =]
June 26th, 2014
afronife

Quote:

Originally Posted by nzxt

Very plain, need more composition and depth.
http://i59.tinypic.com/2evvi1c.jpg

Very nice, the font doesn't suit the theme though
http://i62.tinypic.com/kc1pir.jpg

It is best to use C4Ds around the render
http://i62.tinypic.com/ziukjs.jpg

Nice Work! How do you get the text to have 2 colors? Can you PM the tutorial for the second one? Thanks and your doing better than me in Photoshop :p
June 26th, 2014
ClashWithStyle

Quote:

Originally Posted by RucionaCoc

Starting a clash youtube channel and need a logo and channel art. I really like your work so I was wondering if you could do that.

im not wry good at logos, and I dot have the time atm tbh! When you get over 50 posts leave a request on GFX shop!

Quote:

Originally Posted by NeuralFusion

You take constructive criticism well. I mean that as a compliment.

Good work on improving, keep up the good work =]

haha thank you, and I like people criticising my work because it gives me things to work on!

Quote:

Originally Posted by afronife

Nice Work! How do you get the text to have 2 colors? Can you PM the tutorial for the second one? Thanks and your doing better than me in Photoshop :p

Double click on your text layer then to to gradient overlay, then choose what ever colours you want! I'm happy to do a 1 to 1 google hangout with you if you want?
June 26th, 2014
Coyote87

Ok.. just stop...
you r making me jealous..
I wish I was that good
June 26th, 2014
ClashWithStyle

Quote:

Originally Posted by Coyote87

Ok.. just stop...
you r making me jealous..
I wish I was that good

haha im not stopping! thanks for the feedback though :)
June 26th, 2014
ClashWithStyle

updated with new work!

the new work:
http://i57.tinypic.com/70l1jm.jpg
June 26th, 2014
GameloverHD

Quote:

Originally Posted by ClanDragonTooth

If you guys could just give me some feedback that would be great :)

This is for a GFXR competiton:
http://i59.tinypic.com/2evvi1c.jpg

Made from a tutorial:
http://i62.tinypic.com/kc1pir.jpg

Testing out photoshop:
http://i62.tinypic.com/ziukjs.jpg

http://i57.tinypic.com/rancpk.jpg

http://i57.tinypic.com/70l1jm.jpg

I think the Messi one is too simple but I think you have a fair shot of taking top 3 on B.S.O.T.W. #245;):cool: I think the green one is the best and I wouldn't mind a PM with the tutorial included. I really love those line effects you made there;):cool: KIU with all the kickass designs;):cool:

Quote:

Originally Posted by afronife

Nice Work! How do you get the text to have 2 colors? Can you PM the tutorial for the second one? Thanks and your doing better than me in Photoshop :p

You can either use a Clipping Mask or a Gradient Overlay like Alex explained.

Quote:

Originally Posted by ClanDragonTooth

Double click on your text layer then to to gradient overlay, then choose what ever colours you want! I'm happy to do a 1 to 1 google hangout with you if you want?

I'll take you up on that offer if you don't mind.
June 26th, 2014
ClashWithStyle

another new work!

http://i60.tinypic.com/fbzzbq.jpg
June 26th, 2014
ClashWithStyle

Quote:

Originally Posted by GameloverHD

I think the Messi one is too simple but I think you have a fair shot of taking top 3 on B.S.O.T.W. #245;):cool: I think the green one is the best and I wouldn't mind a PM with the tutorial included. I really love those line effects you made there;):cool: KIU with all the kickass designs;):cool:

You can either use a Clipping Mask or a Gradient Overlay like Alex explained.

I'll take you up on that offer if you don't mind.

haha thanks, its not that good though....

and maybe later we could do a hangout?
June 26th, 2014
Weavil

Quote:

Originally Posted by ClanDragonTooth

http://i60.tinypic.com/fbzzbq.jpg

Where do you get that font from. And is it even a photoshop font?
June 26th, 2014
ClashWithStyle

Quote:

Originally Posted by Weavil

Where do you get that font from. And is it even a photoshop font?

http://www.fontspace.com/category/transformers
June 26th, 2014
DragonX101

Tags 2,3, and 4 are best. Which kind of photoshop are you using?
June 26th, 2014
Weavil

Quote:

Originally Posted by ClanDragonTooth

http://www.fontspace.com/category/transformers

Thx alot! New fonts to try!
June 26th, 2014
GameloverHD

Quote:

Originally Posted by ClanDragonTooth

http://i60.tinypic.com/fbzzbq.jpg

That's my render! I think you took it the wrong way with yellow. IMO orange looks nicer on this render. Your everything else looks tons nicer though:(
June 26th, 2014
Jordan1120

Quote:

Originally Posted by GameloverHD

That's my render! I think you took it the wrong way with yellow. IMO orange looks nicer on this render. Your everything else looks tons nicer though:(

Check glassboard please
June 26th, 2014
ClashWithStyle

Quote:

Originally Posted by DragonX101

Tags 2,3, and 4 are best. Which kind of photoshop are you using?

cs2, its the only free one i could find!
June 26th, 2014
ClashWithStyle

Quote:

Originally Posted by Weavil

Thx alot! New fonts to try!

haha yup, no problem!

Quote:

Originally Posted by GameloverHD

That's my render! I think you took it the wrong way with yellow. IMO orange looks nicer on this render. Your everything else looks tons nicer though:(

haha did you render it? And ik, was trying out new things so....

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jordan1120

Check glassboard please

keep on topic please!
June 26th, 2014
GameloverHD

Quote:

Originally Posted by ClanDragonTooth

cs2, its the only free one i could find!

I have a link to a free CS6 but everyone here who I've sent it to is too chicken to try it out:p I can pass it your way if you like...
June 26th, 2014
ClashWithStyle

Quote:

Originally Posted by GameloverHD

I have a link to a free CS6 but everyone here who I've sent it to is too chicken to try it out:p I can pass it your way if you like...

really, its free? yes please, your amazing bro!
June 26th, 2014
GameloverHD

Quote:

Originally Posted by ClanDragonTooth

haha did you render it? And ik, was trying out new things so....

Of course not lol! I wish I did though. It's pretty sexy:o
June 26th, 2014
FrozenDialects

Wow nice work
June 26th, 2014
ClashWithStyle

Quote:

Originally Posted by GameloverHD

Of course not lol! I wish I did though. It's pretty sexy:o

oh haha just when you said "its my render" and ikr aha
June 26th, 2014
GameloverHD

Quote:

Originally Posted by ClanDragonTooth

really, its free? yes please, your amazing bro!

Not as amazing as you:o
June 26th, 2014
ClashWithStyle

Quote:

Originally Posted by FrozenDialects

Wow nice work

Thanks man :)
June 26th, 2014
ClashWithStyle

Quote:

Originally Posted by GameloverHD

Not as amazing as you:o

awwww too kind bro!
June 26th, 2014
GameloverHD

Quote:

Originally Posted by ClanDragonTooth

awwww too kind bro!

Hahahahahahaha;):cool:
June 26th, 2014
ClashWithStyle

edits

http://i60.tinypic.com/96du6v.jpg
June 26th, 2014
GameloverHD

Quote:

Originally Posted by ClanDragonTooth

http://i60.tinypic.com/96du6v.jpg

Orange is my favorite color so of course I like this better:o
June 26th, 2014
ClashWithStyle

Quote:

Originally Posted by GameloverHD

Orange is my favorite color so of course I like this better:o

haha good good :)
June 26th, 2014
GameloverHD

Quote:

Originally Posted by ClanDragonTooth

haha good good :)

Gradient map right?

What do you think of this? It's for SUNsation but I know it could be better. It needs some C4Ds but everything I add just doesn't seem to fit right:(

http://i.imgur.com/tx20PrB.png
June 26th, 2014
ClashWithStyle

Quote:

Originally Posted by GameloverHD

Gradient map right?

What do you think of this? It's for SUNsation but I know it could be better. It needs some C4Ds but everything I add just doesn't seem to fit right:(

http://i.imgur.com/tx20PrB.png

No i just fiddled with the hue and saturation! And its quite good, can you pm me the psd and i will have a go at it!
June 26th, 2014
afronife

Quote:

Originally Posted by GameloverHD

Gradient map right?

What do you think of this? It's for SUNsation but I know it could be better. It needs some C4Ds but everything I add just doesn't seem to fit right:(

http://i.imgur.com/tx20PrB.png

Can you pm the psd too? I want to see your style:o
June 26th, 2014
GameloverHD

Quote:

Originally Posted by ClanDragonTooth

No i just fiddled with the hue and saturation! And its quite good, can you pm me the psd and i will have a go at it!

Sure thing;):cool:
June 26th, 2014
ClashWithStyle

updated

thanks GLHD for your tips etc :)

http://i61.tinypic.com/2jeu0kn.jpg
June 26th, 2014
afronife

Quote:

Originally Posted by ClanDragonTooth

thanks GLHD for your tips etc :)

http://i61.tinypic.com/2jeu0kn.jpg

Dayum that is very good. Looks like pro;)
June 26th, 2014
ClashWithStyle

Quote:

Originally Posted by afronife

Dayum that is very good. Looks like pro;)

haha thanks :)
June 26th, 2014
GameloverHD

Quote:

Originally Posted by ClanDragonTooth

thanks GLHD for your tips etc :)

http://i61.tinypic.com/2jeu0kn.jpg

No problem bro! You did most of the hard work;):cool:

Quote:

Originally Posted by afronife

Dayum that is very good. Looks like pro;)

I know right!
June 26th, 2014
ClashWithStyle

Quote:

Originally Posted by GameloverHD

No problem bro! You did most of the hard work;):cool:

I know right!

haha i know, but you still helped! i edited you psd, just going to pm you it!
June 26th, 2014
GameloverHD

Quote:

Originally Posted by ClanDragonTooth

haha i know, but you still helped! i edited you psd, just going to pm you it!

All I did was tell you about the tiny text and tell you to remove the bottom lights:rolleyes:
June 26th, 2014
ClashWithStyle

Quote:

Originally Posted by GameloverHD

All I did was tell you about the tiny text and tell you to remove the bottom lights:rolleyes:

small details make the difference!
June 26th, 2014
GameloverHD

Quote:

Originally Posted by ClanDragonTooth

small details make the difference!

Ah well:o

10 chars
June 26th, 2014
ClashWithStyle

Quote:

Originally Posted by GameloverHD

Ah well:o

10 chars

hahaha always happy to have your opinion!
June 26th, 2014
Weavil

That is an pretty good looking sig
June 26th, 2014
ClashWithStyle

Quote:

Originally Posted by Weavil

That is an pretty good looking sig

thanks mate :)
June 27th, 2014
ClashWithStyle

new work

http://i57.tinypic.com/i1d64j.jpg
June 27th, 2014
ClashWithStyle

new work

more new work:
http://i59.tinypic.com/6thh4z.jpg

edits:
http://i57.tinypic.com/2mfgkg4.jpg
June 27th, 2014
ClashWithStyle

more new work

http://i57.tinypic.com/2e4ffk3.jpg
June 28th, 2014
ClashWithStyle

Updated OP!

http://i60.tinypic.com/2irm1sp.jpg
June 28th, 2014
DragonX101

Quote:

Originally Posted by ClanDragonTooth

If you guys could just give me some feedback that would be great :)

http://i57.tinypic.com/rancpk.jpg
personally, i think this tag is your best. Everything fits. But if i made that i would place the text on the right near his shoulder/neck/head. But idk if that would make it better. The blending and colors in this tag is great

http://i57.tinypic.com/70l1jm.jpg
for this one, same thing but the text is perfect. Render blends in very well

http://i60.tinypic.com/fbzzbq.jpg

Edited version:
http://i60.tinypic.com/96du6v.jpg
those two ^^^ i dont like them very much to be honest. The c4d doesnt fit, and the render doesnt blend in too well
http://i61.tinypic.com/2jeu0kn.jpg
This one is perfect. Im starting to think that your first tag, the text is perfect. I now just think we just have different styles of text.

http://i57.tinypic.com/i1d64j.jpg
This one is perfect. I just would make the render a little tiny tiny bit bluer. To fit and blend in more. I really think you should work on the text. It doesnt fit. The blue behind "Halo" makes it not fit too.

http://i59.tinypic.com/6thh4z.jpg

edited:
http://i57.tinypic.com/2mfgkg4.jpg
These two ^^^ are perfect. Its just the render that gives me worries(because its facing backward, hard to make it the focal point)

http://i57.tinypic.com/2e4ffk3.jpg
Great, but render needs to blend in more. It was hard to find the focal point at first because this render is kinda too off centered. I would move it up a bit. The text is hard to read IMO

http://i60.tinypic.com/2irm1sp.jpg
Really great. I almost thought that c4d in the foreground was part of his clothing. This one is really nice too. But i would work on text. The blue doesnt fit. At the top left and right, you brushed on them. Im assuming to give a light effect or something? I recommend putting it of linear dodge then.

My replies in bold. I hope they help :)

Overall i think you should work on your text,blending and depth
June 28th, 2014
ClashWithStyle

Quote:

Originally Posted by DragonX101

My replies in bold. I hope they help :)

Overall i think you should work on your text,blending and depth

Thanks man some of the best feedback I've had! And ik my text sucks!
June 28th, 2014
sirhybrid

They are great, I think you just need to work on finding the right colors for your text. Otherwise they are amazing GFX, even if I wouldn't want one.
June 28th, 2014
ClashWithStyle

Quote:

Originally Posted by sirhybrid

They are great, I think you just need to work on finding the right colors for your text. Otherwise they are amazing GFX, even if I wouldn't want one.

Yeah I need to look at some text tutorials! Thanks anyway man .)