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My first C4D signature/tag. I have tried a lot and gave up when it looked bad but anyways what do you think? Some credits to ClanDragonTooth for the text

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Hmmm the render isnt tht blended in with the color. Red orbs would be a better idea. The text coulf be smaller and off to the side. Rende needs to be in the middle

Edit: usimg bad phone, so there is alot of typos

Try not to white wash the render so much! Also try to add some red in the c4d's as it would fit better with the render!

No disrespect to Dragon but the render should not be centred. Every render is different but off centred is the general rule of thumb. Your starting to create depth and composition, step in right direction.

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Originally Posted by nzxt

No disrespect to Dragon but the render should not be centred. Every render is different but off centred is the general rule of thumb. Your starting to create depth and composition, step in right direction.

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No direspect to nzxt. He is correct that the render should be off center but it should be centered in some cases. It should be placed according to the rule of thirds. No direspect to Dragon as well, as big text can look good.

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Originally Posted by Ervin

No direspect to nzxt. He is correct that the render should be off center but it should be centered in some cases. It should be placed according to the rule of thirds. No direspect to Dragon as well, as big text can look good.

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I see your point, (no disrespect to ervin)but wont it take attention away from the render which should should have been the focal point? And too distracting?

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Originally Posted by DragonX101

I see your point, (no disrespect to ervin)but wont it take attention away from the render which should should have been the focal point? And too distracting?

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It will, but it doesn't sometimes. Text should be an extension if not the focal itself.

No disrespect to the right of saying no disrespect even though you don't really need to say it unless your really disrespecting someone and saying that makes it better, I like it. Colours don't find. The C4D orb are orange. The Pandaria render is red - at least the panda is in a red cloak.

No disrespect for anyone.
It shouldn't damn matter where the render is alligned to... wouldn't it just be based from the flow/direction of the render...?

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Nice sig, pretty amazing for a first try. I like the red orbs. However, the render could stand out more I guess?
Also, it feels kinda empty in the black space. Try to add some minor details that don't take over the black space.

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Originally Posted by Recricon

No disrespect to the right of saying no disrespect even though you don't really need to say it unless your really disrespecting someone and saying that makes it better, I like it. Colours don't find. The C4D orb are orange. The Pandaria render is red - at least the panda is in a red cloak.

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Originally Posted by DOODYDUM

No disrespect for anyone.
It shouldn't damn matter where the render is alligned to... wouldn't it just be based from the flow/direction of the render...?

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Nice sig, pretty amazing for a first try. I like the red orbs. However, the render could stand out more I guess?
Also, it feels kinda empty in the black space. Try to add some minor details that don't take over the black space.

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Originally Posted by Ervin

No direspect to nzxt. He is correct that the render should be off center but it should be centered in some cases. It should be placed according to the rule of thirds. No direspect to Dragon as well, as big text can look good.

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Originally Posted by DragonX101

I see your point, (no disrespect to ervin)but wont it take attention away from the render which should should have been the focal point? And too distracting?

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Originally Posted by Ervin

It will, but it doesn't sometimes. Text should be an extension if not the focal itself.

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Thanks for all the tips. I tried to make it red but some of the orbs wouldn't look red but look like pink or purple