Background needs blending and looks to washed out.
Outer Glow doesn't look good on render
Add a border
Burn & Dodge
Text is too big and move it close to render. Sub-text should be smaller than the main text.
Sharpen render after done.
Use photo filter if you want for clean-up ish. (Your Choice)
6/10
I could write simple tutorial if you want. You Don't listen to me since I suck at GFX

